Overall I liked the story. A nice classic type fairy tale with a built-in way for the bad person to be found out with or by.
If they hadn’t seen each other’s faces before/during the wedding, I think it would have made more sense. As for how he would have recognized the maid as the girl he married, he would have seen the necklace he gave her when she was calling for him and went to find out what was going on.
Then they would recognize each other and it would have been a great reunion.
But that is just my two cents.
I liked your story and I really liked how it was drawn. 🙂 I enjoyed reading it.
Overall I liked the story. A nice classic type fairy tale with a built-in way for the bad person to be found out with or by.
If they hadn’t seen each other’s faces before/during the wedding, I think it would have made more sense. As for how he would have recognized the maid as the girl he married, he would have seen the necklace he gave her when she was calling for him and went to find out what was going on.
Then they would recognize each other and it would have been a great reunion.
But that is just my two cents.
I liked your story and I really liked how it was drawn. 🙂 I enjoyed reading it.